Norman Hewitt SPCA

Today Norman came to our school to promote animals being 'One of the family.' . I enjoyed this presentation because it showcased the importance of having animals in your family. I personally have had 3 dogs, and 3 cats and all of them have been great pets and have been very loving. I agree with Norman's opinion that raising children with animals, can help mellow their character for future years.
I would recommend that if you have the opportunity to

Setting and Story.

WALT: describe the setting of a story using ‘show’ not ‘tell’

SC:

- to use descriptive language to help the reader visualise the setting

- to use language that activates the readers’ senses e.g smell and sound

- to use similes and metaphors to describe the setting

- to use interesting vocab to describe the setting 

I walked through the sliding doors, A large man with a ginger  beard looked up at me from behind the counter, He was reading a superman comic.

I browsed the new releases and picked up Iron Man 3. I walked to the counter and handed it to the large man. He charged me 8$ so I paid and wa

lked back to my car.

1. Video Store

2. I browsed the new releases, Iron Man 3

3. G

4. Comment: I Got it quite fast, you had a lot of words that gave it away to me.

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